Improving Art

You're definitely improving! Take on all the advice that's already been said, however. I also think that the bottom looks a little too chunky.

Hey everyone, I know everyone hasn't seen my pixel art in a while. Thats because I am working behind the scenes for certain things. Anyways I made this couch and I thought that to show everyone how I have been improving my pixel art I should post it. So here it is




Feel free to post your comments.

Hope you like it!

I like it, but something looks out of proportion. I think it's the tickness of the front but the thiness of the back, not sure.

Too little difference in the shades of red, it is VERY hard to make out the sections of the armchair but a good start and the shape is good

EDIT - One arm is bigger than the other and it needs to be fixed

yeah something is definitely off. It's a good start. I think the back should be a little taller because no one can sit on it while it's that small. The shading is nice. Almost there.

your improving yes, but you arent up to a good mmocc's standards yet.

No offense but i had to dim down the lights in my pc just to see it properly lol it proper Bright :S

I would think that couch would be good in a regular mmocc

I like it. +rep for trying.

Quote:

It needs improving, like many have said the back isn't very high, and one arm is bigger than the other.