Updated works

Heya, i know you guys didnt like the last bits of mine but because i was working with some other guys on a MMOCC i have been refining and refining them. Heres a tester i came up with, comments please

Im also looking for any team in need of a pixel artist seeing as well... just a bit too trusting on the last project shall we say and i have a lot of (i think) good ideas

Sorry about the quality, its the only picture hosting site i could think of.

http://www.uploadgeek.com/uploads456...0Protected.png

The room is nice but the black lines kill it.

Hmm, i tried other coloured lines but it didnt work out so well

Its not that bad...I like the tree's too many black lines though.
Maybe a dark gray or gray in some places would look nice.

Mmmk

On green instad of balck use dark green. Pretty simple.

I actually like that a lot! But yeah, it would look a lot better if there was less black lines.
+rep though.

Thanks, ill fix them after my ton of coursework is done

wots with all the black lines i think the chairs and PLANT need sum work but nice to keep work Safe

Mmm. Ill experiment with the line colour later and yeah i like to protect the work because i feel unsure of trust online these days.